|Reviews for The Club|
| Itssostrangehere 10/25/10 . chapter 4
Simple and to the point. That's my theme for today so, here's my review.
UPDATE SOON! It's great!
| rabidah23 10/14/10 . chapter 4
Please write some more! I've read this (along with your other stories) a couple of times now and I really like your writing style. Please update soon!
| nicky 7/7/10 . chapter 4
Hi, I love this story and I hope you will write another chapter. Maybe you could include a little bit of the past three years, so that it is clear what Alex has done and such.
Looking forward to next
| k 6/2/10 . chapter 4
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| Ever and Ever 5/30/10 . chapter 4
Lolz, Alex just got owned by a bookshelf. (Sorry I just find it funny that he slipped on a magazine.) It' sweet that Wolf wants to help him.
| Leigh Brewer 5/22/10 . chapter 1
First off let me say I really like this, and all of your stories, but I have a few critiques, which I hope you take with a grain of salt )
Up until the fourth chapter I was having trouble finding anything to critique. I do find Wolf's attitude towards Alex a little off putting. He's almost acting like a father figure to him, with feeding him and such, which is whats a litle awkward for me, but I can see how it could be taken as love, however I also have a hard time swallowing the idea that Wolf could be in 'love' so quickly.
Also, the other issue I had, was the bookcase... Eh. It seems a little like you were grasping for something to move the story along, but that's just me. The me that says they can't have uber kinky sex when Alex is so broken up p
Over all it's professional and amusing and you were completley right about your stand on 'cum'. That's one of my pet peeves...
| Lady China 5/7/10 . chapter 4
I love it! Update!;)
| 2maluv 4/23/10 . chapter 4
love the bdsm... cant wait for yassen's appearance... personally i'd prefer it if they shared him... so much more room for kinky sex... or if yassen won but only time will tell right?
| niallcaniborrowyou 4/13/10 . chapter 1
More, more,more,more! I really love Alex/Wolf and Yassen/Alex stories! Yours combines the best of both worlds! Don't make me wait any longer! Lol
| bananacupcakes 4/5/10 . chapter 4
Please continue :]
| cares113 3/22/10 . chapter 4
Really really good
| HPStrangelove 2/25/10 . chapter 4
Poor Alex - Wolf will make him feel better. I can't believe someone told you to use 'cum'. Every writer knows that is a novice mistake. I'm glad you stood up for yourself.
| Optomistic Emo Kleptomaniac 2/18/10 . chapter 4
X3 Alex has a mini person like me!
who cheer or runs when embarrasing things occur XD
| Independent-Chick-92 2/14/10 . chapter 4
Alex just had to get hurt didn't he, lol. But I think it's sweet Wolf wants to take care of him.
I love the story... Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you up-date soon!
| The Blackest Night 2/12/10 . chapter 4
i think cock is slang too though...just a thought. i really like ur stories tho!