First of all I just want to thankyou for writing a beautiful story involving Cailin. Second, major kudos on making me cry during th final chapter. I love your work, keep it up.

:( Alistair died. Good story though.

You do such a good job characterising Cailan. You're making me sad that he died so early in the game!

I've read this story dozens of times and every single blasted time I cry like a baby does whenever their favorite toy is taken away. The emotions you move in me ... it's simply amazing.

I know I should have reviewed before now, heck I may have at one point in time, but if not, I suppose it's better late than never.

This is a very good, moving story ... even if I had hoped that Alistair would have lived and Isobel could have been queen, but alas, only in fairy tales does everyone have that destined 'happy ending'.

And that is what makes your story a good one. You have this ability to write and move people with what you write, making the reader see in the minds eye exactly what you are describing.

*stands up and claps* Well done. :)

It's a lovely tale, beautifully told.

The lack of any true happily-ever-after is a real punch in the gut, but certainly rings true for the characters and the world they live in.

It's so hard to find any Cousland/Cailan pairings (I love alternate pairings), and I thank you for persevering and completing your story the way you saw it. I daresay reading it has brought pleasure to a great many.

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i have just finished reading the whole of The Beacon, its been on my laptop and phone for the last 3 days, you have done a amazing job bringing Cailan back to life in such a wonderful way. i have enjoyed this so much even now as i sit here with tears in my eyes for Alistair, im so glad Cailan got a bit more out of life and some happyness, playing the Return to Ostager was heartbreaking and i loved how you gave the brothers back to each other thank you so much for sharing :)

You know, so few fanfics make me cry... You did just that. Poor Alistair... my favorite character.. :..( and haha I couldn't spell on my last review. XD AndI can't believe you got hate for this wonderful story! D: LETS HATE THE HATERS! XD

Love your story. There are rarely any Cailin stories. Yours was great. But Its so hard to decide who'd go great with Isobelle. D: Alistair is my favorite character in the game, but Cailin is rarely used, and probably a gentlemen. so hard to decide! Love the story! :D

aww loved it such a shame alistair had to die though

wowo intense so who placed the blow atop drakon

ooh love it but poor alistair hes gonna take the final blow i take it

aww i feel for alistair i really do

interesting chapter

yay they love on another need to get rid of anora hurdle first though lol

love this