Oh my gosh

You killed Tim. Good story too. I want to read one where you kill DiNozzo. :)

Your soo mean!:(

OH MY GOD! YOU KILLED TIMMY! (ypou gotta love the south park reference)

Aww! Why did you have to go and kill tim? The rest of the story was good except for the part where Tim dies. Unless you brought him back in a sequal? Looking forward to more stories from you. Much love, Crazy.

Man... you had me crying in my beer. I'm not actually drinking a beer but crying in my jasmine scented green tea just doesn't have the same ring to it. Everything was just getting to the point where they could fix things with Tim... why did you have to go and kill him off?

I'm torn! I loved the story but hate how the team ended up divided and McGee was gone! WAH!

Very good story...it was a little awkward seeing Gibbs out of his character when he was acting concerned. And you way over-used the semi-colon. Most of the time, you would have been fine with a comma. But, overall, great story!

Thanks for writing.

does this mean that the dog wtll be destroyed? did you really have to kill Tim?

What ? He can't be dead. Please up date soon.

I adored this and although the ending was sudden, I truly think you were right, life and death is just a hairs width apart. I read the sequal and understand why you wrote it in my very humble opinion the story did not require a follow up. The Dog Did It is a powerful piece and I did not mind the fact that the death was not in the warnings. To have done so would have detracted from the message you have put across. Harrassment/bullying in any form is always wrong and leads to people treating others with far less respect than they would wish for themselves.

Wonderful plot

Brilliant dialogue

thanks for sharing.

Pity he stays alive in the sequels :-(

I'd have preferred to see everyone suffering with their open wounds for the rest of their lives.

I loved these bits - thank you! You've said so much in this fic that I didnt know I wanted to say!

I get that Tony is the Senior Field Agent and all; and he's earned the right to pick and make fun; but sometimes he just goes too far. And when he does; it really hurts that you let him get away with it...I need you to get Tony to lay off our personal lives."

That's why he doesn't date! That's why he doesn't even think of dating! You've made him Tony's laughing stock! And while you sit there and help Tony make fun of him; while you twist the knife: his heart breaks even more; right there in your greedy little hands..,.

except for Abby; who sat in the corner; crying damn near hysterically.

OMG! He can't be *tear*

This had better be a dream sequence or something! Thanks for the very dramatic chapter :)

Wow! The mess continues! Thanks :)