Beautifully written. It was nice seeing a less harsh side to Greagoir.

I love this story about Wynne from Greagoir's POV. Nicely done.

Excellent fic. Im glad I stumbled upon this. I never thought of Wynne and Gregoire having a past like that, but they way you write it makes me want to believe it.

Gregoir was the father? I had a suspicion that it was Irving, but Gregoir makes a more endearing story.

Great story. One little nit-picky thing to mention. Wouldn't Gregoir have known Alistair was a Grey Warden?

Daw. I always assumed it was Wynne/Irving but I think I like your idea better. Shades of Cullen/mage PC :3

I love your portrayal of Wynne and Alistair. She's such a mother, I wanted my PC to be able to pester her as much as Alistair gets to :(

This was a heartwarming story I enjoyed reading very much. In my opinion you managed to capture the characters very well and the idea that Wynne was together with Greagoir is a quite interesting one. I like what you did with it and thank you for sharing it. Keep up the good work. :)

I had this thought too!

Lovely little story- bittersweet, I think.

Great story! This was rather interesting. Thanks so much for writing this. God bless!