So sweet!

GAAAHHH! 36 hours? That poor girl!

In a different slant, Raven's urge to be "the mother to her daughter that her own mother never was" was really poignant. There is an example in my family: my father took his father's example as the way NOT to do practically everything. And it worked. It worked really, really well. So, yeah, that segment got me kinda misty.

Super work. Goes directly to Favorites.

I love it. It's awesomely written. I love how you tied the first sentences with the last ones, and her memories are so very precious :) I can't express anymore how much I adored this piece. Keep up the good work!

Wow. Usually I'm not big on married/pregnant Titans, but I must say, this was well done. After coming home from a bad day, this just made me smile and feel all giddy inside! Keep up the good work! And congrats Chico, wherever you are ;).

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Great story! :)

Nice, a little...distant, but I guess that's how Raven is, so it's fitting. :)

Very nice.

Woah, I'm speechless. Your amazing! Seriously, that was just like, breath taking! your potential, the time to write it, the insperation to write it! I love it all! Makes a girl really think! As I'm thinking alot now! That was just so like..Woah! Gee, I have no clue what to say that was so amazing! Continue writing, that's pro writing skills you have! Your Awesome! Jckson15. :D

that was so cute

aw

This was truly a great one-shot and an understanding one at best. :D

I can understand that one's life flashes before you eyes when going through a tramatic moment. :D

Truly an understanding story indeed. :D

Please do keep up the good work upon any future ideas for even greater stories like this one. ;)

That was so beautiful!

I'm crying right now; I'm such a baby!

Just so beautiful!...still crying... lol!

"I told him being in a church would be slightly uncomfortable for me."

Poor Raven. Its always assumed that she's God's enemy simply because of who her father is.

Very sweet. Loved it. You did a superb job! Wow, you're still gonna write another one-shot? Hooray for us(readers) then!

Again, awesome job on the story, can't wait to see what you decide to write next!

*SNIFF* *SNIFF* WOW! You made me cry! I can't believe you made me cry! I'm supposed to be a action-loving Metallica listening tough guy! I'm not supposed to be feeling this! lol! But this story made me cry! lol! WOW! You brought out the inner warmth inside of me! Thank you, I MEAN THANK YOU! You have no idea what this one-shot meant to me! I actually know how Raven feels...it's an unreal experience when you know that you've helped to create a new life that will soon be exposed to this great world! I feel touched and honered that my unborn child has inspired you to write this BEAUTIFUL writing! AMAZING job! I apploud you for your FANTASTIC writing and big heart! Thank You again! And WOW! You want to write me another one-shot! You're AMAZING! I actually feel ashamed that I can't thank you enough...but thank you!

-ChicoMagnifico