it's offical. i am now obsessed completely with your writing. the end.

i have NEVER had the "oh i wanna have kids" moment before, and then i read this, and even though i know it's a complete work of fiction, i find myself still saying "awe, i want to have a baby" and wondering if it would even be close to what you have written here.

I read the story and now the out takes, I wish someone would have done the wedding.

love it, I like that you had him climb the tree (he he make the old man work for it:)

This was great! I love these two so much! Their supply closet was awesome! :)

I positively love these outtakes..

Thanks for them...

I just loved those two. Wow! thoses outakes were so good ! Thank you so much for writting this.

Ugh, couldn't even read this...

Absolutely loved it. So sad to see these two go.

Got a little teary eyed as Bella was telling him how much she loves him. I know she loves him and she's always expressed it. But I don't know if she's ever expressed it this strongly. And I loved hearing it from her.

"My heart beats so fast when you kiss me like this, like it’s going to explode. Fall in love with me again. I’m so in love with you. You have no idea, if I don’t show it…”

The end was pure perfection.

"At around midnight, my phone vibrates and I read three words that never fail to make me smile.

Come to me.

And for the last time in my life, I climb that fucking tree."

LOVE it! Great job!

*sighs* I've loved these two so much! Thank you for this outtake. I have really appreciated how you written bratty Bella's sassy mouth! I'll miss that most of all.

OMG!

iim SOO iin LOVE wiith iit

iits PERFECT!

And for the last time in my life, I climb that f.. tree! That did it for me! Great!

I just loved little Ilsa and how real their life together seams to me.

Young people do silly things sometimes, or even bad things. It's good when they realize where they stand.

nicely done!