Holy. Crap. I love it! Very nice!

good and realistic

wow that was amazing! i love it! i love how it just all flows together! and all the info! im in world history right now and studying the greeks and this gave me a whole new insight on them! i hope you write more!

The story was weird but it could use some differnet wordz

I think this was absolutely awesome. You managed to tell so much of Artaxes' life without making it seemed rushed, which is usually very hard, but you succeeded. Although I unfortunately am not as familiar with the battles of the war, I am more familiar with the customs of the Spartans, and it sounds to me like you were right on. I'm sure you will get a great grade on this!

i rememember when i use to be bored in history apparently in history classes are when alot of stories are written. The history is very accurate and i love it good work!XD