Such a good story please update soon! Also Arya usually doesn't show emotions.

Milady! Now, that's new. Then again, I am still new to this review streak, so I shoudnt be talking.

Or should I?

(notice there's no 'dun dun dun'...)
Man, I put a lot of dot dot dot dot?s

Ooooohhhhhhh... Planing the impossible. It just BURSTS with mystery, then again, the title says it all.

Or does it?

"Dun dun dun..." "Yeah that's right, Im really saying it! What's your promlem? (gasps) Me! Oh my gosh, that's... Wierd."

"and offensive!"

Sob sob sob...

I love it.

Yeah, that's all.

Why are you still reading this!?

Sheesh, you just don't give up.

Fine, ill give you more. This is my second time reading this, and it's STILL great! Hope you... I dont know, make more like this? Yyyyyyaaahhhhh, thats it, make more like this. ;)

WOW! This is the longest review i have EVER put down! That just helps add to the greatness.

Okay, that's TRUELY the end.

You know what, I know you won't give up by experience, so I'm just going to go rrrrriiiigggghhhhttt nnnnoooowwww... (sees outline of head in clouds)

Rue Bladesinger - Ok :) I'll do my best :)

get your butt on that chair, grab your computer, AND TYPE!

Don’t leave me hanging here. update soon

Ahhh! I now know what happened next (from the last chap)! I must admit i kinda expected Eragon to come silently behind him or something... but i like the way you've done it! Brill:D

Great chapter

You guys are awesome! :) I'll post the next chapter soon, I'm gonna try to write it now. :)

WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY? CLIFF HANGER! Great chapter can't wait to find out what happens next! :D

Don’t leave me hanging here!

Really good! Please keep going with it! :D

i plz update soon

OMG keep writing this is the best thing I've ever read! p.s almost better than the books!