|Reviews for Progress|
| Sailaranel 3/24/13 . chapter 1
That's the way it should have been! (obviously a Whole lot would have changed, but regardless...)
So easy to imagine this happening :)
| Noble Korhedron 11/21/12 . chapter 1
L.O.L! Pretty cute little OS. Any chance of more...?
| DelicieuxGateau 9/10/12 . chapter 1
That's seriously the best birthday present ever!
| Guest 8/26/12 . chapter 1
again, more canon that the canon!
you write beautifully.
| Mell C 8/17/12 . chapter 1
Nice! But SM gave us the paper cut, and not the lovin' . . . . I like your alternative.
| mountainlion718 8/14/12 . chapter 1
:) and Jacob never entered the picture! Yay...lol! That was some birthday present!
| rooslovesjackson 5/31/12 . chapter 1
Omfg loved it! Can you plz make another chapter!
| letsjustdance 5/17/12 . chapter 1
Awww..this was sweet..I enjoyed it! *hugs*
| VanessaJJ 5/7/12 . chapter 1
Just great like always ;)
| k1942 2/17/12 . chapter 1
Always knew Ms. Meyer should have used a bit more common sense, when it came to Bella and Edward experimenting. Seeing how well that turned out would have convinced her, I'm sure!
| karencullen2007 2/1/12 . chapter 1
wahoo! Edward got bella off! will u ever continue this?
| I hate angst 9/19/11 . chapter 1
AWWW! I wish new moon was like this. ( then the pedofile dog could die)
Now I want Edward for my brithday too! ;)
| GreenBrownEyedGirl 7/15/11 . chapter 1
that was very nicely done...
can i just say u can really write
| Julia-S77 6/7/11 . chapter 1
this was a much better version of Bella's birthday than the one in New Moon. Loved it xx
| twilightsilje 6/5/11 . chapter 1
Oh, how I wish Edward could do this for me on my birthday ! :))