that was hot.. great little story

I love this. Great job :)

i loved it so hot :P;P

WOW! This story was SO hot! I love how they both came by themselves and then again together! AWESOME! Very hot! Very well written! :)

wow

You've managed to give a devastatingly sexy explanation for why Rachel wears those ridiculous outfits. I think from now on (despite how unbelievable it is) when I watch the show, I will firmly convince myself that this is EXACTLY the reason she dresses like that.

Great story.

Smut is my favorite thing in the world LOL and that was HOT!

Wow! ... just wow! I really hope you continue this story! a sequel? a epilogue? a chapter 2? please! :)

wow that's steamy :)

enthralling

Um...I think I am a puddle on the floor that was so hot..lol

See, that was *the perfect* combo between smut and plot. Without a little plot, it doesn't seem real, because the characters aren't there. I'm totally hoping you continue this story (or lack of) because its glorious. They've been doing this for a year, and not one person has caught them? lol. Would be interesting to say the least.

lol. keep up the great work! :)

whew! I'm sitting in my house alone fanning myself and i feel like a kid caught with my hand in the cookie jar! LOL that was hot. ow ow! lol

very hot nice descriptions

Holy smokes! That was hot! I love the reason why Rachel initially wore her signature outfit, and why she keeps wearing it. I feel guilty, but I have to say that was awesome!