please update soon

Poor Ryo always takes too much on himself. Always blames himself for everything. Please update when you can so I can find out what happens next.

I'm confused. What happened in this chapter?

Ack. Aw...you stopped in the middle. Shame on you! Anyway, this was a good chapter. Ryo was right in character, and I can see the problems Cye's weakness is causing everybody. Good job so far.

Oh yeah...If Anubis is still evil, then the Ancient would still be alive. I hadn't thought about that. Anyway, good chapter. Keep up the good work.

Wow...is Cye's body really that weak? Crud. If Kento has to do CPR, I'm going to laugh. Don't worry, if I throw anything at you, it'll be a cookie.

It WAS short, but still good. Is she going to take off his armor or something? Because that would stink. Your characterization is getting better.

So there's an evil lady too? Cool. I wonder who she's going to attack. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Anubis is still with the dynasty...Cool. That means that he can still yell 'QUAKE. WITH. FEAR!' Sorry. I just had an awsome memory moment. Anyway, keep up the good work.

Thank you. No, Cye can't die- I would've found a way to kill you over the computer. Smart thinking Sage. Now I see why he didn't worry so much. Anyway, good chapter. Yes, Cye probably does weigh less than the others. Heh.

Meanie. Cye can't die. Sage seemed a little weird. I personally think he would have freaked out more if Cye had stopped breathing, but I could be wrong. Good job over all.

They're just randomly fighting, and Cye can't move. That STINKS. Now what? I'd say more, but the chapters are kind of short, so I'd just be saying the same things, like "good characterization" and "good plot development". You'd probably get sick of hearing the same things.

So Kento's hurt? That's an interesting turn of events. I can't wait to see what's going to happen.

Good job with this chapter. Your characterization is pretty good. Keep up the good work!

Good start. Poor Cye, eating all of his squirmy, swimmy friends. RIP poor fishies...Anyway, good job. You even were able to work Rowen's accent into the story!