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The Potters of the Future
2/2/12 . chapter 44
I love Hermione's innuendos.
The Potters of the Future
2/2/12 . chapter 38
The Book Dumbledore gave Harry is Slytherin's Book
The Potters of the Future
2/2/12 . chapter 18
Female if your a boy er sorry
maskedsinger01
1/29/12 . chapter 47
Hello...

I'd just like to let you know that, upon its discovery, I've obsessed over this epic tale for the last few days, reading it every chance I could (I even ignored my boyfriend's texts and my family's demands). Upon finishing A Father's Sin, I feel truly that if the story had gone this way, I would be left rather satisfied rather than simply raw pain. There is nothing better that I've read on this site, nor partially in reality as well, and I'm afraid my praise may fall upon deaf ears... The last update was over two years previous, and I yearn to know the aftermath of your well-written novella (?) with the epilogue you so stated.

I've fallen in love with your work. The way Zachary fit as Harry's alias, the discovery of the fact that he and his father were truly very much alike, the way Draco had decided where his loyalties lay, the raw kindness and human compassion in every chapter. There are so many reasons I wish I could simply print out this masterpiece and carry it with me everywhere I go. So, instead, I will complete your Severitus Challenge as a thank you and as homage.

I must say, the fact that you made it so believable has thoroughly captured my senses. Even in your other shorter, fictions, I found myself clinging to the realism. Harry and Severus's attitudes towards one another are put to the test in each one, and the changes are slow and deliberate. Truly, I must say, you are an artist among us uncultured beings, and I am truly privileged and overjoyed to have been able to read such an amazing work.

I thank you, praise you, and wish to you all the success in the world.

- maskedsinger01, Anna Paola
Epicoolawesome
1/16/12 . chapter 32
Lemme guess, the lion is Severus in animagus form. It makes a ton of sence if you think about it. I might be wrong but it's a great guess.
Me
1/14/12 . chapter 47
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPLOAD THE EPILOGUE!
karlii
1/14/12 . chapter 1
I can't believe there is a chapter I haven't reviewed! haha... :-) So how does it feel to iconic? Can you believe that you started a whole sub-genre? I love it!

What did you think of the Snape scenes in DH2? I honestly think there is probably something canonical that you can use from that to help wrap up this story. Even if it IS to do a crappy epilogue to just end the thing once and for all.. lol

oh... hehehe.. sorry.. not that YOUR epilogue would be crappy.. just that THE epilogue is forever down in the annals of time as THE crappy epilogue.. haha..

you could do your own version of 19 yrs later..

but why? why not bring it to 2012.. yr of the CME's.. zombie apocalypse and the Mayan doomsday...

Good luck in your life! What are you up to these days?
Weller4ever
1/1/12 . chapter 47
Excellent story! :)
DragonWarriorlover123
12/31/11 . chapter 1
I've read this story so many times, yet everytime I read it, I get a differant reaction to it. Good Job.
Phoenix1592
12/23/11 . chapter 47
Great story.

I hope you do an epilogue soon,

I'd like to see everyone's reaction to Zachary being Harry Potter
UponAtlas
11/22/11 . chapter 47
Epilogue? You need to update asap! We're all dying for the ending! :)

~Atlas.
tsukinopen
11/19/11 . chapter 7
nice he was able to fool malfoly
PandoraSilk
11/5/11 . chapter 47
Wow! I just realised that I read a story by the orginal author of my favourite kind of stories, "Severitus"! I'm honoured to have read your story, which is awesome by the way.

Don't know if you still write fanfiction, but I really just came upon this story by accident, and it is amazing. I enjoyed it very much.

Not sure if you ever did upload the Epilogue, but if you did, where can I find it, and if not, do you think that you possibly ever will after all this time.

Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I enjoyed "A Father's sin" immenselly. It's the "ultimate" Severitus in my books, and thank you so much for issuing your challenge, because it's brought forth a Plethora of wonderful "Snape is Harry's Dad" stories. Of course, none of them are as wonderful as yours.
Zynna
10/12/11 . chapter 1
i likey
Hephzibah06
10/1/11 . chapter 47
Good story. I'm glad it has an ending point, although I too would really like to read the epilogue you promised readers in 2009.
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