I loved your story and your unique envisioning of the characters and their relationships! I truly hope you will be posting an epilogue soon, I want more happy Harry and Snape! I'm also curious to find out how everyone, especially Draco, reacts to the news that "Zachary" is Harry Potter! More please!

Wow! What a great read! Couldn't put it down! Hopefully the epilogue won't take you too long to write. Congrats!

A great story. I'm glad that your still working on it.

awsome

Wow, this is an awesome story! One could consider it finished but please upload the epilogue as well!! Anything for another chapter of this story!! XD

Hey this is a really great story
its an interesting idea
i like the concept of the Serpent Children and everything concerning how they are controlled and how Harry was able to take control of them :D
this is very well written
im loving it so far!!
looking forward to reading more
so i hope u update soon!! XD

Malfoy is awesome, I do not mind them "worming their way" into your story at all!

Can you Please, Please, PLEASE let Draco be good??

Amazing, amazing, amazing!!

Please update the epilogue soon! I want to see your ending. Your animagi ideas were very good, even though I find it funny that Snape - the Head of Slytherin - became a Gryffindor Lion! :D

Great, great story, loved it so much!

Just finished reading the story.
WELL DONE!
Excellent descriptive imagery, character development and growth well within possible limits so no one is really OOC up to Book 4.

You mentioned a possible sequel.

I'd like to see more of Draco and his father interacting,
with Malfoy Senior realizing his son's actions may have saved them both.

maybe do something to help the Serpent's children recover, or at least not be destroyed.

With Moldywart so publicly defeated, and Zachary Snape and Harry Potter revealed to be the same person, *please* rip Fudge a new one.

I have a giggle scene in mind, if you might consider it.

Zach asks Sev how he makes his robes billow, with the comment that if Zach could learn to do the same it would totally blow Ron's mind.
Could be just a throw away line, could be a full set up for a prank chapter.

I enjoyed your story.
Thanks for writing it.

Well it took you some time but the story is almost over! can't wait for the next (and last) chapter! It was a great chapter!

*drops to knees, clasps hands, offers up the bestest puppy dog eyes available* Epilogue soon please.

I've just spent all day reading this story and I'm dying to see how it finishes, it's brilliant, one of the best non-snarry hp fics I've had the pleasure of reading.

OMG! This was one of the best Severitus stories I've ever read! I cannot wait for the epilogue! I hope you finish cleaning it up soon!

O.M.G.

Please end it already!! I've been waiting for MONTHS. and I'm DYING. D-Y-I-N-G.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! =)