I LOVE this story. It's absolutely perfect.

Oh my gosh this was so so cute. And eee it just makes me happy how unbelievably sweet this was.

Makes me smile so much

i giggled at the ending

Aaaw ain't that sweet! I love Ellis, and Nick can be such an ass. You did great with keepin' 'em all in character and stuff. great job.

I was laughing so hard with Nick's thoughts before he yelled. and even a little after, but it was still sad to hear Ellis be so quiet. It just ain't right.

I love Ellis's stories. They are just so funny, it sucks eggs they never let 'im finish his stories. Poor guy. He's so cute. I love 'im.

Thanks for writing.

Haha, how cute. You gotta love Ellis and his stories. If only they'd let him finish them in the game!

Very cute story. ]

Kind of a nice break from all that slash I keep coming across on this site. -_-' I mean I'm alright with slash occasionally, but it's hard to come across a good story that doesn't focus on Nick/Ellis yaoi. A lot of it's just really weird, in my opinion...

Haha, listen to me prattling on. I'm starting to sound like Ellis. Anyway, I really do like this and you write pretty well! Keep up the good work. ]

very warm story. I really loved it.

(: i really like this fic.

ellis is so adorable :]

keep up the great work

It brought a smile to my face. Thank you for this wonderful little story.

Cute. Very cute ] Ellis seemed so fragile, it made me want to hug him

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That was sweet. :)

Ah Rochelle, ever the peacemaker. xD

Awn... So CUTE! *-*

Really, I loved it! :3

Cute! I wont correct the mistake I desperately want to XD Because its been corrected 3 times. First non-romance or slash story I've read that I really liked. Was very in character (except I'm not sure he'd let himself feel guilty that easily!) and very cute! Nicely done!

Polished or not, it was very cute. Didn't squint but whatever, lol.

I had to chuckle there at the end, and at the fic in general...in the best of ways, of course. I really like how you wrote them all, very in-character!

Kudos!

Loved it; very real and very in character, I think. :)