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Donegone
2004-08-25 . chapter 28
Good job, Jay. You flew through Smackdown, but the descriptions of matches as opposed to the entire match itself, proved to be able to make reading a lot easier. Good switch of tactics. For some reason, I miss having Big Show after I read this. The big lug would make a decent face title contender.

Man, I cannot wait for Wrestlemania. Storm vs Austin with simply pwn all. DOn't lose that spark, my friend, you've still got it.
bobdead
2003-11-10 . chapter 26
this is great do more!1
Donegone
2003-05-09 . chapter 26
Oh man, The Storm is gonna be **! Funny, though. I thought Storm was gonna bust Austin's butt first. Oh well, good chapter Jay! Been al ong time since the last chapter, too, so it's good to see Storm back in action.
Athe0s
2002-12-21 . chapter 24
Dude, yet another amazing chapter. You never cease to amaze me. Keep this up. I'm really lookiong forward to more.

Merry Christmas
Donegone
2002-11-25 . chapter 23
The spiraling madness of Matthew Skinner coninues and all around him suffer. I can see why he didn't want Stone Cold winning the title: because Storm wants to win the title himself and he wants to kill triple H in doing it. Nothing wrong with that, but now he's spiraling towards darkness and no one can bring him out of it. Heave help the poor souls in the Invasion cause they are DEAD!

Good chapter, by the way.

--Red Sonic
Aaron
2002-11-15 . chapter 23
Another great chapter, it's going to be wild. i think i have an idea why the storm is attacking both triple h and stone cold. but it's going to be a wild ride. and it seems like hell's bells are here. oh man. this is going to be wild. how can you be a wrestler who now feels no pain, don't care except just destroying anybody in his path, first it was alliance, now it's stone cold and triple h, i think the storm wants to hold both titles. keep them coming jay, this is wild stuff
Athe0s
2002-10-04 . chapter 22
As always, an excellent chapter, man. Your writing never ceases to amaze me. A very interesting twist to the end, I might add. Keep up the amaingly great work.
Donegone
2002-10-04 . chapter 22
A most awesome outing. One of the best sotries so far. I truly enjoy this series so much. The way you capture the promos of The Hurricane os so dead on its not even funny. I'm tempted to think Jay 2K Winger may just be Gregory Helms IRL, but I won't do that.

Anyway, I'll give a count for every match i read.

Booker T vs Victor E. was a solid opening bout with the usual Booker T. flavor added and a decent finish.

The Christian vs Edge match was just as good to read as their ladder match last year was. A bit surprised to see Christian win the belt, but an excellent match nonetheless.

The Four-Corners Tag-Team match was excellent! It had me on the edge of my computer screen seeing who would win and i wans't disappointed

The Storm vs Rhyno match was a wonderful mix of NO DQ rules and smart wrestling that doesn't make its way on tv that much anymore. An A+ match in my book and I'll put this one on my list of favorite stories on my computer.

The rest of the PPV was just as good and the finish with Austin, HHH, and Storm being a good finish to a great story in the end.

The backstage segments were their usual written gold. The History package of the WCW title on Storm was done so well, I could see the vignette in my head as if the WWF had actually done it themselves. Keep up the good work Jay! And if anyone wants to The Storm also appears in my original wreslting fanfiction Ironside Championship Wrestling--with Jay's blessings of course.

--Red Sonic
Lemonmaster
2002-09-05 . chapter 21
Perhaps a Storm and Stephanie lemon? That's something I'd love to read!!
Donegone
2002-09-03 . chapter 21
Excellent as always. I feel somewhat sorry for the Storm, but not really since he's doing things to people I've always wanted to see happen. No Way Out is shaping up to be a very intense pay-per-view that I'd buy in a heartbeat. Keep up the fantastic job, Jay

--Red Sonic
Athe0s
2002-08-31 . chapter 21
Amazing chapter, man. I was quite perturbed by Storm's threat to Steph. All in all, amazing work. Keep it up.
Athe0s
2002-08-26 . chapter 20
Excellent chapter, man. Anyone who reads your fics will know what truly amazing writing is.
Red Sonic
2002-08-20 . chapter 19
Good chapter. But let me say something that I have noticed over the course of this series. At no time has Jay let his Storm character elivate himself far above the rest of the pack. While The Storm still kicks all **, he has never held the World Title and that, to me, seems to be a batter trend than everyone else who uses their fan chars and makes them to be unstoppable.

In my opinion, Storm has elivated himself far above the rest of the fanfic pack by having a very human and realistic approach to a great character.

That's why it honors me so much to have The Storm in my own fanfiction, Ironside Championship Wrestling. Beign a writer of several years, I have seldom come across a talent the likes of Jay. I say keep writing and don't stop.!!
Aaron
2002-08-19 . chapter 19
Oh man! The storm has truly became the force of nature, he's going to destroy every alliance member oh man. the allance has pushed too far. Great story jay, the storm has finally snapped, and lost all control. Alliance has unleashed a truly unstoppable beast. BE AFRAID! BE VERY AFRAID!! Jay, you rule man
Athe0s
2002-08-18 . chapter 19
Brilliant. I loved this chapter. Can't wait for the next.
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