I really liked this. Off to read more of your stuff! :)

Sibling Toko is cannon! Or it should be! I liked it.

-Dyslexic Nerd

My poor heart can't take much more of this.

But screw my poor heart. It can take it.

Raylie

This was cute and it made me smile. :)

I'm glad at how flexible this story was, because it could go either way into sibling or romantic territory. But I can see myself going back to this time and time again to enjoy it for either one when I am in the mood for it.

I love how natural you made it for Toph to seek comfort in one of the group members when she sleeps - the referencing to staying with either Katara or Sokka was nice and made it seem all the more innocent. As I read this, I was more aware than ever how young all the characters are - it's so surprising each time I remember Toph is merely twelve! But in here everything was so calm and soothing instead of sexualized like Toko fics usually are (not that I mind when I read those kinds of fics, it's just the age thing usually haha).

The small bit of banter in there was very fluid, and I love how they still remain in character. I think you did a great job.

I love this story. It makes me smile every time I read it (and that is pretty often). I especially love the part where Toph talks about her "women's intuition" it made me giggle. I'm leaning more towards sibling love in this story but I adore the pairing. :)

Awh that was so sweet!

THESE TWO ARE MY FAVORITES. Anything involving their relationship is just perfect to me. Zuko is so sweet, inviting her to lay down with him! It's so innocent and cute. And the talk they had, and his comforting, and THE KISS and it was all just so captivating and sweet and oh man oh man you're AWESOME.

Sibling love or romance .. I can go either way with these two too. That was so sweet .. they both just needed someone to be there for them .. and the person you least expect turns out to be the one you've always been looking for. It was great!

My fingers were personally crossed for lurve! haha I thought this fic was pretty suitable for each respective character. It wasn't too over sappy and definitely kept my attention throughout the whole story. Major thumbs up on a nice story!

This was super sweet! _ as much as I love Toph & Sokka together, I am TophxZuko all the way! : D

I definitely don't mind it as romantic or sibling. I just know this was a super cute fic between them. Thanks for posting it.

Val

Awe, so cute (:

Oh my God, this is just one of the cutest Toko fics ever, and trust me, I've read a lot of Toko fics. So so so cute.

i love it. Toph and Zuko are my favorite! Really great!

Luve!