Oooo... So beautiful... Moooooooore! (Please.)

Write on!

An enchanted Yume

Wow! Now I see why everyone's talking about you. I really liked this story especially the childness of it. Reminded me of my niece and nephew - The only thing I can see a problem with is the part when Joia and Shimmer meet. Just before the who gossip stone thing, it seems confusing. It might just be me though. - Hope to see more soon.

really great...make another chapter...bhaha...shredded flames...

-the crow

I told you I'd come here to comment. You should have more reviews than this. P Anywho, I love your story and your use of imagery; seems like I can picture everything in your mind. Plus your original characters don't stand out as completely alien to the Hylian world, like some do, and their's no Mary Sue! Rejoice! _ Now you need to post chapter 3, or at least give it to us to tear apart. D

This is really good. You have an excellant writing style, which is harder than it looks. Can't wait to read the rest.

Coolness! You posted the first chapter. You've already gotten my opinion on the fic, but I have to take this chance to say publicly that I'm really looking forward to reading more. You have a very formal, yet gentle, voice that makes it a joy to read your story. Keep it coming! :-)