This be Talis!Thats funny!She calls him jackass!Funny!Pleaz countinue!

I decided just to review all chapters right here. I liked the story, though the introduction of Aya in writing the new chapters is most likely gonna end up in total annihalation of all life. j/k. Good work, guys. I mean girls.

Great job...

Victory smile activate

Flame responsively...

See you, space Cowgirl...(tomorrow in fact..)

*Beware Shoulderinthewallmon*

WE'RE THE UNBEATABLE ZOIDS FANFIC TEAM! HURRY UP! WE GOT TO GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP FAST!

Update NOW!

YOU BETTER HURRY UP AND GET THE NEXT CHAPTER FINISHED! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE MECOB! *sob* this fic is so {in the words of Limina} super mega magic sweeeeet!

Good. During spring break I'm going to the SH library everyday from 1:00 to whatever time my dad picks me up. meet me there if you can.

Good work! Keep up the progress, nitika! From your friend that lives in a different county.

Ooh, nice ficcie! ( I like the authors note at the end of chappy five, lol) Hope ya write more soon, 'cuz I need to read more! *YAWNS* Sry, but it is 3:00 am and I'm really sleepy... Anyways, I love your fic! Please write more soon!

good job girl cant wait to see what happens next. talk to you on the bus.

*blinks* O.O Did he really take off ALL her clothes and go into the bath WITH her? o.O

I luv your story so far! it's fantabulous reading, and the plot appears to be maturing well. I won't ask about the scars.

::RoAwR::

...But I can't stop him from asking. (Points at Red Liger) Anywho, I wish you luck in writing, and may the mecha of Zi be with you!

Later!

Phoenix (The slightly crazed...) of the Cold Fire (Brrrr...*(8-O...)

Great work! At least its better than my Zoids fanfic. :P

short an sweet, lol. I like it

Me like it! - I'm gonna post my Zoids ficcy up as soon as I stop being lazy. :P I an't wait till de second chapter!