Excelent. Yeah that pretty well sums it up. I wish I could eventually think of something out of the ordinary to write about. You are obviously very tallented.

Best story ever. I have reread this story every time I want a good cry.

Gosh, this is so sweet. I love the work you've put into this - it really shows. It makes the whole story so much deeper and realistic when it's more show than tell, and that's exactly what you've done here. You pulled the whole thing off fantasically, and I congratulate you on that. Keep up the awesome work.

Thanks,

Raven

Well, you've got the questionable honour of receiving my first review, here, ever. I don't suppose you'll read this, being that it's been more than a year since you finished this story, but I absolutely loved it. I've come relatively late to CSI, since I live in Holland, and have only seen season 1 and bits of season 2, but as far as I can tell, your story is very true to character. Thank you for a very beautiful story.

Love, Lisa

Beautiful story.

Good god woman, I LOVE THIS STORY TO DEATH! *pouncetackles you, grinning madly* I like your style of writing, and with every word written, I found myself in the minds and the worlds that the characters a put in, and what they have to go through. I hope that you write alot more soon! It was a pleasure to have stumbled across such a beautiful work of writing :)

This was a cool story. It was very true to the show, though I agree with you. The show could be even better with some your suggestions. Wonder if they ever let fans write scripts?

That was a beautiful ending. I loved it. No matter what u think i don't believe this fizzled out, i think it worked. It worked for these two characters - they need a simple loving life and this showed that. Keep it up.

Also, i just want to say that i'm sorry for your loss.

Becki XX

I'm so glad that you decided to finish this. I agree that the endng was not as strong as it could have been, but just the image of Sara and Gil together was enough. Just remember, you can always come back to the story. That's the beauty of fanfiction. Since it's never published, there is never a final form. When you are ready, we'll be waiting.

-Leanne

Amber, you're such a great writer! This story always gets me crying and I thank you so, so much for reading it. It was the first CSI fic I ever read and it got me into this whole, wonderful, amazing world! I owe you a lot! Thanks again!

Marita

amber, you're awesome. i've never even seen the show this is based on, and i still got hooked on the story. i checked almost everyday to see if there was more added to gmac, and i reallly liked it. don't stop writing!

I'm sorry to hear bout ur friend passing away, and I hope that you get over this writers block soon. I've been following this story from the beginning and I REALLY love it! It kinda captures the stubborn essence of the charracters (meaning Gris and Sara). Take ur time though, heck, I have 16 stories posted and only 2 done and I'm only working on 2 right now (it's mostly sailor moon stuff from a while ago). Luve the story!

-Abby _

Great story. I just read it from beginning till end and I have to say it's one of the best CSI stories I've read. You've made them all very real, especially Grissom and Sara.

WOW! Awesome story, I cried. Loved it. Keep writing more, you have excellent talent and an incredible knowledge of the show and the character history. Awesome.

Wow... That left me breathless. That tells you this is a REALLY good fic... so DON'T STOP HERE! Very angsty, especially the first few parts; kept me glued to my chair. Would if I could I would get off my ass and actually try to write like this... You expressed the characters so well here. Liked the viewpoint from Sara, and the always professional, methodical way from Gris shined in here... Ecklie's such an asswipe... Heh, poor cute Nick's gonna die... And I'm rambling here. Must sleep. Keep it up and you'll be considered to get a raise... Damnit I forgot to keep it a secret *Runs off before CSI producers/writers can shoot her down*