|Reviews for Finders Keepers|
| KKBELVIS 12/18/09 . chapter 3
Sammy, just trust me.”
“You know I do,” Sam said quietly.
So adore that exchange above.
I also adore your dark side, Darth!
Wonderfully, creepy the ghosts are and lots of tender caring Dean and hurting Sammy!
Dean hurry back!
Hope things slow down so you can post more soon!
| vonnie836 12/18/09 . chapter 3
Oh man, poor Sam, he is really suffering PTSD. And Dean is gone, but now it looks like they are back, Gerti and her brother and it's not just imagination. Take you time, I'm in the same boat right now, most of us are. So don't stress, just finish this when you can relax again. It's awesome, so it's well worth waiting for. Hugs, Vonnie
| samgirl19 12/18/09 . chapter 3
oh no there back and sam is alone i hope dean comes back and destroy there spirits and salt and burn there bones. so far sam is suffering from post traumatic stress disorder.
| samgirl19 12/18/09 . chapter 1
i sure do a limp sam story and this is interesting story can't wait to read more
| lelann37 12/18/09 . chapter 3
meep! that's damn creepy at the end. love the chapter
| Madebyme 12/18/09 . chapter 3
Oh look what you did! I just knew that the escape from the house was too easy and went too smoothly - especially for the Winchesters! Something had to go pear shaped.
Again with the details - they really bring this fic to life. Dean giving Sam his socks, a time limit for the shower, giving his only certain items of clothes so that he can check Sam's injuries. You know, I think they're the things that I look forward to the most about your writing!
But then you go and throw a curve ball! You really set the scene well, with a flashback from Sam's time with the ghosts, so much so that you can't help but wonder if they are really there or if it's all in Sam's post traumatic mind!
Great job and gripping cliff-hanger! I’m very much looking forward to more of this - I always know I’m in for a treat with your writing. Catch you next time, take care, Abbi
| pandora jazz 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Thanks again for reuniting the brothers, because now we get to see Dean taking care of Sam and Sam trying to recover from the trauma both physical and emotional that he has suffered.
Love how Dean recognized that Sam was wanting to have some control back in his life, such as taking a shower, to asking about staying another night at the motel or even the meds, especially since Sam had no control over his life for ten days.
Of course, reading about Sam's nightmare of his time with the spirits was rough, but you did a good job with that, just enough to make us feel awful for Sam, instead of filling half a chapter with abuse.
I was surprised that Dean did leave Sam so soon after finding is brother, even if he did need to make a supply run. I hope Dean will be back soon. Very creepy ending if the spirits are still around and have found Sam.
Thanks for the wonderful update and except for the spirits creeping me out, I also shuddered at Bobby's line about Rufus calling off the hounds. When I read hounds, I think of hell hounds, even though that is not what Bobby meant at all. Weird I know.
Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
| Lilwazzabug 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Crap. These people are persistent mofos. And why the eff did Dean feel the need to leave his newly-found brother alone?
| carocali 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Oh, these ghosts are persistant! How are they following Sam out of the house? What will they do to him? Can't wait for more from you dark and twisted...oh, um, I mean your creative genius... yeah! That's what I meant. ;p
Anyway, more please! Must know what happens!
| cookjar 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Loving this story. Especially the twisted part with the little girl's cat. Very good writing. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more.
| darksupernatural 12/17/09 . chapter 3
ACK!I can't believe you went there...again. Looks like they're fixated on Sam now and Dean has some more ghost ass kicking, traumatized baby brother to deal with. I can't wait for more!
| sammygirl1963 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Oh Crap, I never expected that ending to this chapter. I thought Sammy was finally safe. Never even contemplated the ghosts coming to their motel room.
| irismay42 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Gah! I thought Dean got Sam away from the psycho ghosts a little bit too easily! I got a really bad feeling the second Dean said he was going out for supplies! No! Don't leave Sam on his own, silly boy!
Loved how you contrasted Sam's horror at being kept in the dark and touched against his will with relaxing as he let Dean cover his eyes and take care of his wounds.
| devon99 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Is it real or just Sam's mind playing understandable tricks on him? I love that I dont know, its an indicator of the quality of your writing. It's never obvious or formulaic. Sam probably doesnt even know of its real or not either. Fab stuff indeed:)
| geminigrl11 12/17/09 . chapter 3
Dun, dun, dun! Poor Sam-out of the house but not out of the woods yet! And you've left him bereft of Dean! Big brother is needed at the rescue and QUICKLY!
Tense, emotional writing...I feel like I am living this with both boys. Can't wait to read what's next...I have a feeling that, whatever it is, the emotional scars are not going to heal too quickly...