Well i liked it alot but the ending seems like the ending of just one chapter. So get goin and make another, i want to kno wat happens!

That was Great!

I've read the EXDACTLY the same story some where in A moon Romance before, I just forgot the title.. No offense but I prefer that rather than yours.. yours.. well is really bad

hihi! rini here! just wanted to thank you for the great review! [Oh, I do have other stories out already.] Okay, now it's my turn to review! *evil sadistic laugh* just kidding. I have to say, not bad for a first fan fic. Some grammer and punctuation errors, and the plot moved a little fast, but it was still good. I'll read your stories as they come out, I promise! Really! (You will look for my reviews right?) I can't wait to see how your writing style develops! So keep writing! rini

It sucked. I'm sorry, but your just a average writer (in this, at least) and just have been taking old, used, unorginal ideas everyone has.

funny and sweet