Okay, this story? Just made my day that much better.

I absolutely loved how you used Viv, even Brock by extension, to look at Darien and Bobby from outside our usually constricted contexts (Darien's own head). Plus, Viv is a pretty interesting character in her own right, so it was a delight to see her written, especially written so well as she was. :)

Honestly, this story is a complete gem. You write well, very, very well, and you do this fandom a great justice.

Any chance you'll write more for Invisible Man in the future?

Thanks for sharing!

Oro