Neat story! Confusing at the end, but very, very neat idea. I can't believe Guenhwyvar was a part of L'Sarol, but it does make sense. The new character of Hierathe was interesting, and Entreri.. neat characterization! All in all, one excellent tale.

i like it! im a bit confused though, lol. please continue it!

Shame you had to speed it up so fast, I kinda liked the earlier two chapters, ah well Jarlaxle can go burn in the abyss.

I see you're not much of a Drizzt fan, nice enough fight scene though. Well anyway, shorter than I expected, but not bad, hears hoping Hierathe dies slowly and painfully, go humans! (and orcs, Githyanki, Githzerai, dwarves, undead and any other cool race.)

Good luck with the next (and probably last) chapter.

wow ! it was great ! plz continue

Nice plot. I hope this is a continueing trend, till next time ;)

A good, enjoyable start ...Hierathe is a nicely fleshed out and believable character - quite wry, alluring and more than a bit sneaky ...the scene where Hierathe rates Entreri's physique is funny.

Oh, damn your cliffhanger ending - just who are the other opponents? For a minute, I thought you were going to do a paper-scissors-stone thing with the three combatants, each wielding a different part of the whole weapon, all fighting each other at the same time, with different opponents being immune to one part of the weapon but not the other part ...but it seems you aren't ...which would have been probably fun, if tricky, to write ...anyway, I shall wait patiently for chapter 2.