|Reviews for Innocence Lost|
| Eleantris 3/5/10 . chapter 35
Of course I'll forgive the cliffie - I LIKED the cliffie! Brilliant chapter, you wrote Tizzy's shock and confusion reallt well and I especially liked that little bit you wove in there about Bellatrix asking where they were keeping Voldemort, that made me chuckle. More soon please! X D
| Alaksandra 3/5/10 . chapter 35
Holy hell, wonder what he's got to say to all of that! I sure hope he isn't going to let her go. How is this going to work in cannon? Is she and Severus going to have the same arrangement that her parents have? Is she there in the end to save him?
| Viva Palestina 3/5/10 . chapter 35
I wanted to be the first to review...but my internet seems to have impeccable timing and crashed just as the review box was loading :(
You made my day, actually scrap that, my week :) The perfect gift for having to submit four assignments in a week
I love each chapter more than the one before it! Beautiful. Loved Severus, he was there for her, just like she tried to be there for him when he was going through hard times. True friends..maybe even more soon?
Loved your cliffie (never thought I would admit it!) but now Im dying for more...pretty please with double whipped cream and a cherry on top?
| Charlotte Brandon 3/5/10 . chapter 35
Cliffies are wonderfully evil things you know? Now I'm itching to know, itching to read more and thats so bad...Keep up the good job I'm loving it!
| rosechris 3/5/10 . chapter 35
I am eager to read the next chapter. This one was a real pleasure. I hope Severus will find words to comfort her. And to understand that he loves her.
| Brume7 3/5/10 . chapter 35
Great chapter! I love when Severus is so gentle, kind, tender and conforting. Well, I know, it might not last long, but anyway, it shows that he can be a very fantastic person when he wants! I hope he will be able to explain and make Tizzy understand why he stopped, because, he did make the wise choice. She was distressed. I really hope he will find the good words.
As for the Longbottoms, it's very sad...
Good chapter! I loved it!
| DarkestAngel13 3/4/10 . chapter 35
| brandon279 3/4/10 . chapter 35
well, great chapter.
the next chapter will be Sev confesses, or that what we hope for.
| junewilliams7 3/4/10 . chapter 35
Well, it's good that she told him she loves him, but I hope he responds better than he did to his mother when Eileen told him she loves him. Poor Longbottoms... Poppy should still tell Tizzy about the alarms, since they still might go off for someone else. Thanks for updating!
| wickedwench1 3/4/10 . chapter 35
The next scene has him chasing after her - his robes BILLOWing behind him - until he catches her and explains that he wants to take things slowly.
Don't you like my reference in this review.
| severus49 3/4/10 . chapter 35
Wah! Is it a bad thing to be an empath for a character? I'm crying for Tizzy! Oh, its got to be okay, it's just GOT TO!
| notwritten 3/4/10 . chapter 35
Pleasant and interesting. Keep smiling. :-)
| Jaccalax 3/4/10 . chapter 35
not another cliffhanger!
i'm sick so now and i can't start reading ANOTHER fic so i'm basically laying around waiting for the next chapter . . .please update soon!
| SituationalExtrovert 3/4/10 . chapter 35
This right here...
"Severus was very, very surprised. She wanted to be on his lap? It couldn't be. It just couldn't. Nobody wanted to be on his lap. Nobody needed his closeness. He couldn't possibly provide the same warmth he gave her. He was a cold person, a horrible person."
...is so very sad, it hurts.
"No," he said. "No. We've done this before and it wasn't a good idea. It won't be a good idea now."
Please, please PLEASE let him be smart enough to actually say the proper words to explain himself. Let him tell Tizzy that it is HER he wants to see first thing every morning, and that they should try and be with each other because they actually want to be with each other. Yes, sometimes passion is an acceptable substitute for despair in the short term, but it's an unhealthy habit to form. Tizzy needs to understand this. And if there is anything Severus doesn't need, it is more unhealthy habits. He already keeps his own council too much; he needs to trust Tizzy as much as she trusts him. He's so awkward, the poor bastard.
I do so love your Severus; I wouldn't mind giving him a little "comfort" myself. *le sigh*
Go update again, pleasethankyouverymuch.
| Alabaster Princess 3/4/10 . chapter 35
Aww, this is how I always imagined sev; the solid rock you can cling to when the world goes crazy.3
*sigh* If only such things were real; to faint against his strong embrace like some gothic heroine.
serious jealousy strike :( to be carried in such a manner. it screams against my independent (read stubborn) nature but by the gods,i wish it were so. : bad bad coffee. make up for it now, with victorian smut ;)