wow- well done.

Aww...This is so sad...the thoughts of a deranged mind full of regrets. I think it's a great one shot. thanks for posting this. This was a great read.

Woo, a fic about Nagare! There aren't enough stories involving him. I like how this was written, with all the emotions Nagare felt and how trapped he was. He must be the worst off of all the characters. Poor guy. Nicely written!

Waah...I think I need Byakko-plushie more than you do!

Poor Nagare. Though I feel for the guy, who's to say that he could've manned up and prevented all this from happening? Or at least done something within his own power to look out for his loved ones? Certainly a 'what if' type of situation - he brought it on himself. Just my own opinion XP

But nonetheless, this was a heartbreaking read. Really well-written! That last sentence just ripped me in two. *sniffles*