Too much mention of rape in this story, it's a complete turnoff, seriously, don't let rape happen, it puts a downer on any story

while this story is roughly written, the main reason why i wont be reading anymore of this is because of the angsty, emo crap with harry contemplating suicide.

on a more pleasant note, from reading your favorite authors on your profile, i would make a few recommendations for some excellent writers: For Fantasy, Steven Erikson's Malazan Tales of the Book of the Fallen Series, Robert Jordan's Wheel of Time Series, and Terry Goodkind's Sword of Truth Series. for SciFi, i would reccomend David Weber's Honor Harrington Series.

I just finished your story. It was awesome. good job on mixing in the Lore of Middle Earth with LoTR. You must be a Tolkien fan to know Gandlaf's true name. You have great writing skill. I thoroughly enjoyed this story I'll check out your other stories.

just curious... why the name denethor? isn't that the name of the steward of gondor?

I had hoped that Tirith was Sirius. But I guess not. Too bad. It would have done Harry a bit of good to have that bit resolved positively for him.

Less than a dozen poorly armed vagabonds gave him trouble? Really? Well, in that case it seems unlikely he'll be succeeding on his own, not unless he just needs practice (I say this knowing he will, I just don't see how). That said the story is starting to pick up and I look forward to where it might be going.

Great story.

I loved it :)

cant wait to read the sequal !

Wow i love this story so much! You really seem to know what your talking about with the history of middle earth (which is a releaf after reading stories where people have obviously just watched the film - one person didn't even know who Tolkien was!). it's brilliantly written and structured. I love the H/L pairing and all the characters. There is never a dull moment either. Can't wait to start reading part 2! Good luck with all your future writing! J.L

People with that type of authority scare me :/

Wow, just wow. Excellent! Cheers! Looking forward to reading the sequel!

Okay, I have to admit that when I first read the summary, I wasn't sure that to think but it had Luna in it so I decided to give it a try. I thought it would be a bit more on the side of Harry being so powerful and it turning out bad. This is one of my favorite crossovers of all the crossovers I've read in the different fandoms. I actually have the second part already brought up and ready for reading. This is one of the few that I wasn't sure about and ended up liking. Thank you for not making Harry and Luna overly powerful.

FAB. U. LOUS.

OHMYGOD.

SIRIUS BLACK.

OMG...

Woah, it'd always be Harry who'd manage the unmanageable. :)

Great writing