OMG THIS IS SOOOOO CHEESY! i actually laughed instead of cried ( like u thought the reader would!) kleenex alert was unnecessary! if you made it less dramatic it would prob be better! sorry 2 flame!

awwwww that was so good! So sad that it's over!

Luv story

Great chapter. :D I'm soo glad they are all out, and no one important died. :D Too bad it's the end...but it was a great story while it lasted. :P Keep writing.

Are you listening to me? I SAID UPDATE. and it is not good for your health to disobey me. if you are going through extreme heartbreak or injuries, ok. NOTHING ELSE CAN STAND IN THE WAY OF YOUR WRITING. if you r having WB than review your own fan fic and SAY SO so i'll know! i can read ur reviews, any1 can. BUT! WRITE SOON PLEASE! keep on writin!

cant believe you only got 14 rev/s so far, you deserve a BILLION! your writing is amazing i love love love it so keep on writing, what the heck it says you last updated on the 16th? youre gonna update soon RITE? you better, buster! keep on writin!

sweet story Do NOT LET FANG DIE

or i will cry :'(

keep writing :) please update soon

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i thought u were gonna tell us how fang got hurt

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Wow, that was great! Two chapters rapid fire. I hope Fang comes out okay. :D Great writing, can't wait to hear from gazzy and iggy.

Great story! :) It's just a little confusing, though... One second she's having a brain attack, the next she's eating pizz laughing. Some constructive criticism would be to try to make the story flow better.

Please don't be offended, it's an awesome story :)

natalie

Ah! Just tell us whether he dies or not! I can't take the suspense!

This is an awesome story and I love your writing style!

:o

its really good can't wait for more

great job