 Neev 2002-08-09 . chapter 1I liked this a lot, particularily how you had showed that Brad does actually care about Schuldich, but at the same time kept him in character. Schu...was perhaps a bit ooc, but on the other hand this is pre-series Schu, isn't it? So it didn't bother me a whole lot. The weird changes in perspective were a little weird and jaring and first, but I think it worked well for the story and I got used to it quickly. Heh, all in all, I really loved this fic though. |