He leído los primeros 5 capítulos, tus notas dicen que has tenido problemas para avanzar en el fic. Piensa bien cuanto quieres extender tu historia, espero que no dejes la historia inconclusa.

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I read the first 5 chapters, your notes say you've had trouble advancing the fic. Think about how much you want to extend your story, I hope you do not leave the story unfinished.

Plz post more chapters!

r u gonna put amother chapt?

nc story didnt seem to figure out why the shows ccs and naruto but the plot was awesome especially when i read this on my cell keep making more ok gud luk!

this is a good story so far can u update more plz!

Does Hotaru ever get her memories back? Does she get her sight back? Has Sakura captured all the clow cards yet?

I agree, poor Shikamaru got dragged off to be on student council. Is this before or after the time skip in Naruto? My guess is after, but just to be sure. Um, does Sai show up?

this is really intersting... clubs... hmm... shino, ino and kiba-nature club... shikamaru-shogi/chess club... chouji- baking club... im not sure about the others but i think most of them will most likely be in a martial arts club or something

why don't you put them in sports i think naruto would be good in soccer maybe, and ten-ten can be in basketball, hineta can be in dance or cheer-leading with sakura and ino, sasuke can be in a karate club, and thats all i can think of right know hope it helped

d story is interesting..i'm looking forward 4 ur future updates..i'm sure der will b pairings in ur story as well..:))try making pairs out of d diff chars in naruto & CCS.. like sasutomo, naoko/lee, rika/shino or huever.. its ur choice if ur going to take me seriously...- will eriol be here?

I love your story and I hope you continue to write.

this is a good story, please update whenever you get the chance