I'm enjoying your style of writing, and am especially looking forward to reading your longer IZ fics. This, of course, was another good one. Poor Dib. It'd make a nice exercise in psychology and angst to continue this and watch how Dib has to deal with this, you know. ;)

Dang! All your stories are awsome! But I really liked this one!

dib is not the only one sorprised,I wasn't expecting tht evilness at the end either xd I'm being reading your fanfics (I'll go review them all later)and I like seeing you write both of them acting differently depending the situation,meaning you are not...monotonoes,is that the word? well I like it.

that was awesome :)

This was really good and very interesting.

What really creeped me out while I was reading it was that there's a storm outside my window and it's making freaky noises. Plus, something (probably a tree branch) keeps scratching the glass.

I really enjoyed this one-shot.

xD I love how Zim gets his hopes up. XD

Man, nightmares suck, poor Dib, he'll hav even worse nightmares now

I do like the idea but I feel like something is missing from it? I don't know what it could be but I did like it.

Oh, sweetly sadistic. Nice!

I luvd it!

Man, I wantd to see the look on Dibs' face, too D'

LOL.

Keep up the good work

I really really really loved how this ended. I almost didn't read it becasue of the ZaDr warning on in the summary (which I didn't really see) but the story was absolutly brilliant! :D

That is a good story. Kinda tragic, feel sorry for Dib :( But it is a good good story

aw...poor Dib :/

Funny unrelated story: I was looking for Johnny The Homicidal maniac and out of the 5 stores not one had it !

You could make the ZADR more obvious by making one of Zim's point of view, either at the time he was in the room with him or where you last left off. You could make it where he used that excuse to both make Dib not any suspicious of the real reason why and to somehow stay in denial of that same reason at the same time. But I suppose that idea is a bit off.

Sincerely,