OMG!

This episode was forever ago- and your fic was posted forever ago - but I just read it, and I had to comment.

This is the best post-Heroes fic I've read. It so fabulously captures the intensity of the emotions, and the discomfort the two men feel about showing and sharing those emotions. I wish they had allowed closure like this in the actual show!

Bravo! Well done!

SSW

Deals with a lot of the things that were missing to make for the dramatic effect of not knowing who had died (like we didn't all know before anyway).

...AW! I love it! So good

Oh, this story has been in my "favorites" folder quite a while! I like your take on Jack and Daniel's relationship/friendship at the time (and up to) the events of Heroes. You bring them a much needed resolution and a new start of sorts.

I enjoyed reading this one and your other works, thanks :)

That was really lovely. A nice addition to a great episode. You caught Jack and Daniel's voices well, and the ending was nicely done. Thanks.

I enjoyed this story very much ... well done.

I especially liked the scene with Jack and Daniel sitting on the infirmary floor

Very touching and sensitive short story. I really do

appreciate your writing this too.

Thanks from Nana Lee