Can u finish please

year and a half later... lol. you got a good story here. hope you haven't up and abandoned it. -#2

add chapter add more now now hurry wanting more

I am liking this, even if Billy is a little OOC at times.

wow billy about to tell his story what will happen how will they react add more want to read more thanks

Luv this story! Can't wait to read more!

Cliffhanger much? :P hahaha, this was a good chapter! Keep it up! : D

First off, I love this movie and I'm so glad someone had posted more than one chapter for such a great movie! You have the characters down perfectly. Lovely. Please post more chapters? Pleaseeee! I'm obsessed now. ( :

great story please add more want to know what happens next

wow billy really sick with fever finish this story its awesome hurry finish it

I love it! Update soon!

Interesting start. Your punctuation needs a little work and there were a few small mistakes here and there. Sometimes having an extra pair of eyes go over what you've written helps you spot the small mistakes, a beta is always a great help I hear :o) If you smoothed out those (minor) creases it would be even more enjoyable to read.

Onto the story.

I like the idea of finding out about Billy's past via a journal, very original and clever.

Billy is very in character in this chapter and I enjoyed reading him as you wrote him. I'm certainly looking forward to reading more.

Keep it up, all the best now,

Brian

CONTINUE :)

Oo I'm intERESted! You gotta continue! Please! I'm begging you!

Love it! Update soon!