Wow! Well done!

Normally, I am purely a 585 fan, but this was so well done!

Enjoyed it! Thanks!

I find this story to be quite cute

Hm...interesting. Interesting and good.

Fantastic introspect Sanzo piece.

O_O You're so god! Sugoi! Sugoi! Kepp on writing fics, I'd read every single one! ,

I like the way you write, with a sense of depth and seriousness that justified Sanzo's thoughts and emotions.

Formidably written! Impressive and great piece of fanfic. Poetic in every way, and it was a great thing to read this. Why do you never capitalized the first letters in the poem lines?

Just keep it up!

only a few words...more please!

Wow. I'm always wary about Saiyuki yaoi. I mean, I love it to death, but everything in the series is so borderline that trying to come out and say it in a fic so rarely seems to work out. Yours worked out. Beautifully.

Hee. I -liked- this one. _ It's exactly the way I think Sanzo and Hakkai would be together. Sanzo always hiding from his feelings, and Hakkai never saying anything outright. Perfect!

...On a related but entirely random note, did you know that in Japanese legends, fireflies are symbolic of the spirits of the dead? Fitting, if you ask me. _

Poetic as always! The repetition of phrases flows very well. Little details like "crinkle-in-the-corner-of-his-eyes-smile", and the bit about seeing his body like art, wai! You catch little details about people very well and express them poetically is the culmination of those sentances. Your Sanzou is much much more on target than a lot of the Sanzous ficked out there... Fic'd... Fick'd... ::coughs:: Details that are details that describe Sanzou and not some other person with the name of Sanzou attached. And of course, your Hakkai is straight on, but I think you should know your Hakkai is straight on! Very nicely done!