My comments:

1. First time I saw Doumeki being so vocal about his worries for Watanuki. Usually, he just acts on it, but hey, I'm not complaining. It's a new perspective. _

story is good for a quick read, with dialog taking up the majority of it, but if you want to spark the reader's imagination more, you might want to add more words to describe the places, atmosphere, characters,etc.

3. I'm still sad about the way the manga turned out. I want Watanuki to be able to go out like a normal person again. Besides, Doumeki's right that he (Watanuki) thinks too little about himself!

4. Watanuki talking in his sleep, I like the idea!

5. All in all, good story, with caring Doumeki and sweet, selfless Watanuki _

LOL

wait scince when did the shop ever close?

by the way u update realy fast

its awsome

MOKANA IS A MOKANA best line in the seires

i loved the quick update!

LOL none of them wholesome!

hilarious xD

can't wait until you update! :D

but don't rush yourself. don't you dare :O

/;SEi

lol i wonder if she's going to be back the next day :P

sleep-talking.. well that's something new!

i thought he never really did.. though when he had dreams of haruka-san and the such.. he spoke then.. ._.

/;SEi

poor mokona. poor poor manju ;_;

and the "lie" part. is that how it really is supposed to be? O_O

/;SEi

aww. what happened with Doumeki?

he's usually nice to mokona :(

kurotan says manju instead

/;SEi

Mokona is 100% in character, he/she/it/that makes me giggle x)

I didn't get what was that talk that Doumeki and Yuuko had.

"Watanuki lie on the futon.." spelling correction needed.

hmm.. did he get those wounds because of the wish he granted? i kinda understand it.. but i can't explain it much.. ;_;

/;SEi

i forgot to mention that you spelled couch wrong on the first chapter :O i have such bad memory ;_;

this was a nice chapter :)

completely about them two :D

i wonder what happened to watanuki? ._.

/;SEi

ohhmyy.

so that's what happened to him...

it was kinda.. what i thought since the compass pointed to herself. it's because he's in her heart, hm?

um. i couldn't get the part of "we will be, by this time tomorrow." and then he said he can't marry her ... that was a bit sad anyhow :(

i wonder how doumeki knew? did his spiritual powers go up a level? :O

/;SEi

er.. i got a little confused in the beginning. so they're outside now? O_O;

and they're walking down the streets...

the ending was real good!

i really can't wait to find out what happened to Yotsuka :O

/;SEi

lol i got a bit lost along the lines of after doumeki entered with a compass and watanuki said, "You, Doumeki." what does that part mean? did he take the wrong thing? O_O;;

Arida-san... i hope she'll find that person she's looking for soon! unless something happens :O

/;SEi