|Reviews for Apathy|
| tetisheri 3/26/11 . chapter 1
I kind of feel bad for Zeke.
| paperwingsandbrokenlegs 12/4/09 . chapter 1
i'm not signed in right now, but that is my username and you could look me up if ever you are possessed by the desire to.
anyway, i was going to say that the angst in this piece is very believable; it's strong and comes off very clearly, but isn not overbearing and does not make zeke sound whiny. that balance is not an easy one, so good on you.
this is also a slightly darker take on zeke than most normally do, but again, it works out.
i'd be glad to read anything more you write for the genre.