|Reviews for My Mistake|
| iSamPuckett 12/15/09 . chapter 3
dude...i will DIE of curiosity if you don't write a sequel...I'm not kidding...and I'll fail all my tests cuz I'll be thinking bout the story XD So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a sequel!
| trainwreck17 12/15/09 . chapter 3
I like this story a lot but you can't end it here! please please please make a sequel!
| tati 12/15/09 . chapter 3
please make a sequel!
| Maddie-the-Cattie 12/15/09 . chapter 3
Okay, this is awesome. One of the best Seddie stories I've ever read. Definitely in my top three. So I would really, really love it if you could possibly do a sequel to it. But I want to do one, too, if that's okay with you. I'll credit you for the beginning.
| Bottle-Blues 12/15/09 . chapter 3
SEQUEL! i SUCK at imagining things x]
| FinaleUltimacian 12/15/09 . chapter 3
it works really well as a one-off, but please please please write a sequel. this has too much potential.
| pigwiz 12/14/09 . chapter 3
Damn you... Leaving the end of a story told this well for the reader to imagine the ending of is criminal. It's you that has created the universe that this tale is told in and about. It's fun and imaginative to leave some things to the reader’s thoughts. But, anything done this well should be finished by the brilliant author that has spun the tale, and put it here to share. I know, I'm being a bitch, so sue me. It's my genders malaise. I'm fine with it taking till hell freezes over to see what your magnificent imagination will do versus the feted morass wallowed in by us lesser mortals. You really MUST finish this, in your words, with your mind.
| seddieisthecure 12/14/09 . chapter 3
Write a sequel! It can't end like this! It's too good of a story to end with a cliffhanger!
| mebemegan 12/14/09 . chapter 3
omg thats amazing! Sequel please :)
| sentimental hearts 12/14/09 . chapter 3
very nice ending, really sticks with you.
i think its perfectly fine on its own, but if you were to end up writing a sequel i wouldnt be opposed to it, haha.
| what lurks beneath 12/14/09 . chapter 3
wow, just wow. not at the fic, yet, but the luck of all this, ive had the worst day in MONTHS. i cant go out to my friends house, and before you think it isnt bad, it it. i can only go once every 2 weeks, and now itll be 2 months since ive seen them, and ive talked to them 3 times, thats it. the only contact i have with people is my immediate family, and im starting to go stir crazy, literally.
and then you finish this with a "heres the end- SMACK" well, i'd be lying if i said i wasent angry, not at you, but life in general. yes, in am emo, but my social life is so small, its hard to lose whats left of it.
and, this chapter was great, i LOVED it. even when angry, i can still tell talent. and the whole thing of blanking out the line, yeah, everyones probably jumping to the conclusion of her saying she loved him, and i am too, because any happiness i can get out of a fic helps.
and sams speech was, well, a blow to the face with a metal bat, i cant find much points to argue with her statements, a lot of it is true, but one thing is, alone, its ONLY survival. to live, we need a purpose, and love can be that. it was a great way to end it, even if it left me wanting for more, a lot more.
i would love if youd make a sequel, why, this sets it up perfectly. i cant force you to, but if you were to, id read it in a heartbeat. and it wasent too cliche, it was so original it HURT, literally.
freddie leaving, leaves so much open, mabye if you wont make a sequel, or cant make one for like, MONTHS. you could put a note on this chapter for someone to be able to make a sequel. im sure someone would love to do that. i'd do it, but i cant make stories because ive got no typing program, and im more of an original work guy, plus, anything i make, cant hold a candle up to this.
oh, and do you know of any downloadable word perfect programs that are free?
| Invader Johnny 12/14/09 . chapter 3
Um Freddie went to look for Sam, that HAD to happen indeed.
I'd say, do a sequel! imagination is good but still, what the author does is kinda better.
Invader Johnny Signing Off.
| xiser2 12/13/09 . chapter 2
i think that its turrning out to be a great storry
| Andrien 12/10/09 . chapter 2
Just found this. Intense! I want to know what's in the letters so badly and I want to see Sam!
The way you've built up Sam is, IMO, spot on. She does make walls and draw on faces, writes scripts for everyday use. I've got to be totally honest, this isn't the first fic I've read that's like this-Freddie tears at Sam's heart and she runs away, angst-but I like the way you've done it. You know the characters very well.
All in all, I really like it! Excited for your update. ;D
| Lanter 12/8/09 . chapter 2
I was fine with this being a one-shot but the second chapter is so good I'm glad you decided to continue. I look forward to the next update.