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Suicide Minion
2006-07-18
ch 5, anon.
abuseJaheira's backstory with Ployer does not make any sense at all.

Other than that, good story.
Reality Helix
2005-06-13
ch 5, anon.
abuseWell! That was an interesting take on Jaheira's "involvement" with Baron Ployer.
Yay! I like these two but they are so underwritten! It's good to find a story entirely about them. Keep it up, it's quite interesting so far.
Star DRagonmaiden
2002-12-01
ch 5, anon.
abuseGood story! I hope you continue it!

~*Star Dragonmaiden*~
Bokthersa
2002-08-09
ch 5,
abuseOoohhh, please more, love this story, love Montaron/Xzar! Please continue!
Pookey
2002-04-30
ch 5, anon.
abuseWRITE MORE!! I wanna see more Monty x Xzar!! The writing is great! Keep it up!
Moragn Of the Sea
2002-03-27
ch 5,
abuseWow... this story is excellent. I love the chemistry between Montaron and Xzar on so many levels. I hope there is more coming very soon.
Katie Hayes
2002-02-17
ch 4, anon.
abuseA different twist for sure. Very interesting. I enjoyed it.
Goggled Monkey
2002-02-13
ch 4,
abuseI love this. Its written soo very well. Xzar just going of on crazed rants makes it perfecto. Can't wait for more. Hurry please!
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