|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Suicide Minion 2006-07-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseJaheira's backstory with Ployer does not make any sense at all. Other than that, good story. |
| Reality Helix 2005-06-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseWell! That was an interesting take on Jaheira's "involvement" with Baron Ployer. Yay! I like these two but they are so underwritten! It's good to find a story entirely about them. Keep it up, it's quite interesting so far. |
| Star DRagonmaiden 2002-12-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseGood story! I hope you continue it! ~*Star Dragonmaiden*~ |
| Bokthersa 2002-08-09 ch 5, | abuseOoohhh, please more, love this story, love Montaron/Xzar! Please continue! |
| Pookey 2002-04-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseWRITE MORE!! I wanna see more Monty x Xzar!! The writing is great! Keep it up! |
| Moragn Of the Sea 2002-03-27 ch 5, | abuseWow... this story is excellent. I love the chemistry between Montaron and Xzar on so many levels. I hope there is more coming very soon. |
| Katie Hayes 2002-02-17 ch 4, anon. | abuseA different twist for sure. Very interesting. I enjoyed it. |
| Goggled Monkey 2002-02-13 ch 4, | abuseI love this. Its written soo very well. Xzar just going of on crazed rants makes it perfecto. Can't wait for more. Hurry please! |