Jaheira's backstory with Ployer does not make any sense at all.

Other than that, good story.

Well! That was an interesting take on Jaheira's "involvement" with Baron Ployer.
Yay! I like these two but they are so underwritten! It's good to find a story entirely about them. Keep it up, it's quite interesting so far.

Good story! I hope you continue it!

~*Star Dragonmaiden*~

Ooohhh, please more, love this story, love Montaron/Xzar! Please continue!

WRITE MORE!! I wanna see more Monty x Xzar!! The writing is great! Keep it up!

Wow... this story is excellent. I love the chemistry between Montaron and Xzar on so many levels. I hope there is more coming very soon.

A different twist for sure. Very interesting. I enjoyed it.

I love this. Its written soo very well. Xzar just going of on crazed rants makes it perfecto. Can't wait for more. Hurry please!