you got my attention. please update soon!

first of all: "obnoxiety" is NOT a word! I object!

VERY interesting character! I like her! ...even though I should hate her, and would, if I met her in person :) Well, OK, "hate" is a strong word ... but I would avoid her like the plague, lest she excite a few impolitic phrases from MY mouth!

And this is quite an exciting plot you have set up here, with at least a couple of unpredictable, intriguing players. Can't wait for more!

Hm... insteresting start! I can't wait to see her reaction to Scott and the others when they arrive in the story! Please update soon!

Agent Malkere