|Reviews for Altered|
| squirttle 12/15/09 . chapter 1
| audacityy 12/10/09 . chapter 1
I loved this. Absolutely loved this. I found that the switched titles and personalities really worked on these two characters- you can really see them as a one-eighty of who they are.
"The red roses resting on the Prince’s neck smell sweet. He wonders if the red rims around her eyes aren’t a little sweeter." That throws such an impact to me as a reader. It stood out. You have a talent for interesting comparisons and one-liners. ]
I don't have anything to critique. Thanks for the delightful read!