|Reviews for Misguided Ghosts|
| rednightmare 1/31/10 . chapter 2
Hello, there! I read this fic after being drawn in by your story title, which is quite compelling! "Misguided Ghosts" does roll so nicely off the tongue, doesn't it?
You've established a solid sequence of events - what I'd love to see more of now is a thicker, fleshed-out description of your charactes. What do they look like, specifically? Any unique features, scars, birthmarks or interesting tattoos we should know about? It might really help the immersion factor of your story to work in a bit of extra info along these lines!
Good start and best of luck with your coming chapters.
| morgan1998 12/3/09 . chapter 1
tthis story so faris great