| Reviews for Electric Love |
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Mislav 1/27/13 . chapter 1This story realy shows how Adrian would do anything for his wife. We should read this story when it comes to our mind that he is selfish or a coward. No offence, but I don't like several things: -if person has condotion Trudy has, no judge would order her to wear electric braiselent. Judge should be infrormed about that. Even if that problem was discovered only later, they could tell that to him (or her). -that things can't simply remove. -Stottlemeyer would never (in my opinion) say such things about Trudy. However, I get your point. Monk was (and still is) willing to suffer, hurt himself, or even die, for Trudy. I like title, it was funny and amuzing. |
Celestearts 12/3/12 . chapter 1I like it! It is sweet how he would do anything for her. The onlything I would change would be to call the judge by a name instead of 'the judge'. But than that it is great. |
kaattiiee 6/13/12 . chapter 1Very sweet, nicely written. I think you wrote Adrian true to character, and you have some very elegant lines in here, like the one about unselfish love being the only way to love (but someone else already pointed it out). I think you've done a good job at painting the love between Monk and his wife sweetly, and what a nice judge, haha. :) Good job. |
OhSnapItzLara 4/19/12 . chapter 1good story (: he really loves his wife 3 |
Hummingbird2 8/31/11 . chapter 1Great line: "Unselfish love is the only love," Very touching, thanks! |
SmellyThePirate 7/8/11 . chapter 1Aww, pretty cute story. I like to see an not-so-OCD Adrian. Good job on this. |
Remus'Girl-Jaggie-Bade 1/18/11 . chapter 1Wow, that was so sweet how he loved his wife enough to take the pain for her. |
LizGilliesFan 1/16/11 . chapter 1I don't know my Monk that much but this is...nothing but TRUE LOVE! I almost cried in some parts of how sweet and true Adrian's love for Trudy is. Adrian is such a brave man an nothing is more valuable in life than true love. You really have an amazing talent writing. You got me into the story and I had nevereven heard of it ! Amaizing job! |
rebanellhart 12/14/10 . chapter 1 cute Story! |
HelloOfficer07 11/23/10 . chapter 1:') happy tears! this was so perfect! i love it! as i told you, i'm not too up on my monk but just from thsi i can tell how much he really loves her. oh. gosh. my heart. it's melting. with love. great job! |
Red X aka Redhood 9/11/10 . chapter 1great story! keep up the good work |
HoboKitty 9/1/10 . chapter 1Awh...that was really sweet what he did for her |
Austin 5/23/10 . chapter 1 This was a very good story, very well written. I could tell Monk really loved his wife veery much. |
Kristina Cawley 4/25/10 . chapter 1 Wow, that's difficult. Do you think you'd be able to do the same? Good story! |
LucasnHaley 4/4/10 . chapter 1Nice story. I could tell Monk loves his wife very much and that he would do anything for her. Sweet happy ending. |