|Reviews for Rookie 5|
| of-the-sunshine 1/18/10 . chapter 8
Nice, I forgot to make this suggestion in the last chapter but I kinda think your OCs are too much powerful then the reest of the bleach cast. Don't get me wrong your OCs are great, but it's just a suggestion. Also, what kind of colour is Alice-blue? It sound really pretty :D
| of-the-sunshine 1/9/10 . chapter 1
First review (or maybe second hehe) I loved the first chapter :D or OC's are very well described and characterized (is that a word :)Hope you keep updating, so I can read even more than the six chapters you already have. I just wanted to let tyou know what an amazing and descriptive story you have :D.