Hey i really like your fic.

I had me thinking, i don't know if you've seen pandora hearts but i think this story could have a sequel in a crossover, maby whith alice creating another world (abyss).

It would be rally intresting to say the least.

Hope to hear of you soon.

That was terribly sad, but beautiful. Very well written too, only a few mistakes that pulled me from the story. Then again, I'm OCD. Very nice job!