An unfashionably late review if I do say so myself. But I have spent about..oh 2 hours or so reading this wonderful masterpiece of a story. Incredibly well done I must say. And I do have to admit I am doing some major Fangirl squealing at all of the Shaun and Rebecca moments (_) which is what drew me to this story in the first place. All in all though I love the entire story, outline, dialogue, plot, everything! I give you a round of applause and a million awards for writing this \(_)/
Now I shall conclude my late review and move onto your other story. May you forever Requiescate en Pace dear friend.

I am so intrigued by this story. I'm reading this at about four in the morning, so I am completely incapable of giving a good review, but I will when I have some sense back in my head after I sleep.

Oh, and I'm adding this to my story alert list so I have easy access to it, but don't worry- I'm not a dummy. I see that this story is done being updated. I'll give you some better feedback when I can. I've really enjoyed everything so far!

Love it :P. disappointed that Revelations didn't continue their story though.

very well written. Good job.

wow this story is so amazing !

i love it, is there a sequel ?

please write one !

On the contrary, your chapter is just the right amount. The killing scene's a bit disturbing, but fit the situation, considering that 16 is like really really crazy... D

Wow. Best Assassin's Creed fanfiction ever written. Most people just fuck with the material until you can't recognize it anymore, and nearly nobody writes about the characters that really matter at the end of the day. That's a definite favorite ... and subscribe.

Well, in total, I read this story in just an hour or two. And I loved every single friggin' minute. I'm definitely reading the sequel! No doubt about it!

Aww, poor shaun :(

Awesomeeee chapter!

VIDIC!

OHHHHH MYYY GOOOOOOOODDD! :O

:D

that's literally all i can say right now. That's how great that was.

loved this chapter. And I agree with the D/L thing. And then they made me even angrier in AC: Brotherhood. That's why I also did that with them in my story. it's like everyone who writes D/L FF knows its supposed to happen or should happen, but ubisoft doesn't. Talk about annoying!

Anyway, lovvvveeeed iiiiitttt!

Haha, " hello? shaun? are you down HOOOOO!.."

LMFAO XD

good chap!

Haha loved this chapter. I laughed out loud when they started singing and drumming because that's EXACTLY what I do .time that song comes on!

you're very talented!

Hello whyduyacare-

Would you allow me to submit this fic and its sequel to a community for Desmond/Lucy? Please respond at your earliest convenience.

-Jack