Another great ch!

Poor Link lol.

Great so far!

That was actually insane.

I don't even know if I lliked the ending or not... I didn't want him to die! D: That was great though- awesome twists!

Your writing never fails to amaze me!

HOLY CRAP IS THIS STORY OVER?

It's really good in my opinion.

YA NEED TAH WRITE MOOOAARR. Pretty please.

I was dissapointed with your ending for this story. I've been a fan of Vaati ever since I got the Minish Cap, years ago. I'm a sucker for happy endings and this isn't one of them.

The plot of bringing Bellum and Oshus in were creative but I would have still liked it if Vaati had been spared. Since his ashes haven't been found and other villians were obviously given a second chance, the ending gives off the vibe of Incompletion.

aaawwwww that's so sad should do another series for it.

i like vaati in this story keep writting

I like the ending alot

whoa Vaati did that? nice one there were a few mistakes in a couple of chapters near the beginning like here is hear, but still well done! W the story is really funny

that's it? he's gone? frankly I don't like the ending but this was an enjoyable reading,maybe too OOC but good,weird it has so few reviews,I have seing fics without sense where they mix everygame and still have reviews,maybe you could turn it into...shonen ai? for us vaati fangirls like you said at the begining, hehehe nah it's yours

That was interesting, in two very distinct ways. First, Vaati was interesting in how he changed without realizing it. I think it was less a change towards good as it was a change backwards, to something of the Minish he had once been. If nothing else, seeing another of his kind clearly threw him back. Secondly, it's absolutely amazing to me that you wrote a twelve chapter story and posted it in the few days since I checked my email last. (I have you on Author Alert.) Brilliant.

And that would be why Bellum looks a hell of a lot like Vaati's final form. :'( Poor Vaati. (Squeezes Vaati) I wuv you, Vaati! X3