Oh wow this story is amazing OwO I just finished reading the book itself today and after that I totally ship Poison and Aelthar 3 I hope you update soon!

Wow! This story is amazing-I love how you "humanize" Aelthar! I know it's been a long time, but could you please please please update? I can't wait to read more!

this is soooooo good. cant wait for you to update it

up lode! up lode! up lode!

Hi :) I am loving how you rewrote the ending to this novel. It allows more room for character development and romance :3 my favorite things about your version: the life of the taken children(it makes Poison stop to think if what she's doing is right), Aelthar's dead relative and how he couldn't save her(giving an explanation for his hatred of humans, which also gives him some human qualities) and Asinastra's poison( you kind of gave a little insight on what it may have been). So, as usual, you're doing great on the chapters and what is contained within them.

please write another chapter!

harsh... poor gal...

Ah, so that's what went on...it makes sense.

:) yay updates! I think this chapter was written well and it didn't feel like you just threw something together to say you updated your story. The delay was worth it.

interesting story...i like it so far

I love this. Everything you write flows together so well, please continue it soon. Also the dresses are beautiful. You have very good taste.

I love Poison's insults, and Aelthar's reaction to them "I am hardly a rodent" I was hoping they'd kiss in this chapter, but what you did was even better. Who knew Aelthar had a sense of chivalry? It makes sense though, his character is very concerned with rules and customs.

This looks really good. You write Aelthar's dialouge very well and I like how you're not rushing the romance. Only question is what time is this taking place in?

Yay! You updated! I like where you have this story headed.

Is that the end? Awwww and it was going so well! U should write more )