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NuPreacher
2008-05-17
ch 16,
abuseHello, again, Cormak. I just had to rereview this chapter. I'm now happily married to a wonderful woman and I can truthfully say that, with her help, the wall is completely gone.
Lucie
2008-03-29
ch 1, anon.
abusedang it girl! i love david bowie and the song strangers when we meet! i hope your storry will go the way it's promising :)
Miss. Poetic
2007-03-04
ch 26,
abuseholy cow, that was A-W-E-s-O-M-E. I really love your stories, I practically have every single one of them as my favorites. This one was really good in particular. I liked Aiden and Cyla, especially Aiden because of being the loyal friend he was to Jareth, it's just, you know, I love characters that are loyal. somehow. anywho, WRITE MORE!! you're good, okay. I suck, although I haven't posted any of my stories yet.I'm afaid i'll suck.
Rhiannon A. Christy
2007-02-19
ch 26,
abuseWell I loved this story very much. I really loved the image of Sarah standing there at the temple watching Jareth leaving. I always found that sort of image very romantic, I think it stems back to when I was little and watched Clash of the Titans. The wind whipping about the Lady's fine hair as she wached her Love ride off, and the silent prayers uttered under her breath.

Anyway, I can't wait to start reading the sequel!

Ok now to go and comment on all the others I read of yours and havn't had the time to.

~Rhia~
Rhiannon A. Christy
2007-02-19
ch 13,
abuseOk since this story is already done I was going to wait till I finished to comment, but I just had to say something...I am so delightfully delighted {um blame it on the lateness for what I write, hehe} that you used works from Loreena McKennitt! I love her, and Marco Polo is one of my favorites, it really is the perfect song to dance to. The book of Secrets is one of her best, though I love her new album very very much...

Ok well now for on the story like my comment should be. I have read many of your other stories, I just have been too busy to be able to comment, as I normally stop reading at 4 or 5 in the morning. But I do plan to go back and coment on them.
I'm loving this story very much! And am delighted with how you display Jareth.
Well I am off to read more, and put this on my favorite story list.

~Rhia~
Zallah
2006-12-13
ch 13,
abuseJust dropping a note to let you know I'm enjoying your story, particularly the Loreena McKennitt song(s) in this chapter (she's one of my favorite artists). Actually, I was also imagining 'Beltane Fire Dance' form Parallel Dreams.
sweetbabby33
2006-06-14
ch 26,
abuseNice~!!
White Rose Withering
2006-02-08
ch 26,
abuseWell you know what they say, "curiosity killed the cat", and it certainly did with me.
It was amazing, i was hooked within the first two chapters. I love your style of writing, the way it was described i could picture everything. Kudos!
El loopy
2006-01-15
ch 26,
abuseI just wanted to tell you that I love this story and it is my favourite Labyrinth fanfiction
Jjah-Jjah
2005-08-28
ch 26,
abuseYay! That was a good story. You rock muchly. :D
Jessi - Princess of Impatie...
2005-06-10
ch 25,
abuse*standing ovation*

Truly fabulous - I'm eager to start the sequel, but I had to give you your standing O first. This story was fantastic! Many times I literally hit the desk in frustration/anxiety over elements of the story, like when Jareth was about to send her back to protect her. In addition to pounding the desk, I nearly couldn't bring myself to scroll down the screen for fear of what would await.

A wonderful story - bravo! :)
Jessi - Princess of Impatie...
2005-06-10
ch 13,
abuse*sighs happily* Fabulous. I'm not done yet but I just had to review this chapter. I got the songs and played them at the right parts and it just added so much to this chapter. "Marco Polo' was perfect and I let it continue to play even after the song in the story was over because I was reluctant to let go of the mood it created. And thanks for pointing me to a great artist I would not have found on my own ;)
jaderook
2004-09-25
ch 26,
abuseSigh! That was wonderful. A truly enjoyable fic. Oh, I so do not need another genre of fanfics to distract me. HP is distracting enough. Anyway, I can't wait to read more from you.
Cariah Delonne
2004-04-23
ch 26,
abuseHm. Good story. =D
Cariah Delonne
2004-04-23
ch 9,
abuseInteresting story - will read more later =D
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