Wonderful ending! I have to say that your story really felt like a true novel...I actually wish I had a hard copy! :-) Great writing and complex situations and dialogue...good stuff!

This is nerve-wracking!

Wonderful!

I am really enjoying this story! Especially the way you are writng Jareth. I love the arrogant yet misunderstood version you've created. Wonderful!

Wow...

GREAT.NEXT STORY PLEASE

Hello, again, Cormak. I just had to rereview this chapter. I'm now happily married to a wonderful woman and I can truthfully say that, with her help, the wall is completely gone.

dang it girl! i love david bowie and the song strangers when we meet! i hope your storry will go the way it's promising :)

holy cow, that was A-W-E-s-O-M-E. I really love your stories, I practically have every single one of them as my favorites. This one was really good in particular. I liked Aiden and Cyla, especially Aiden because of being the loyal friend he was to Jareth, it's just, you know, I love characters that are loyal. somehow. anywho, WRITE MORE!! you're good, okay. I suck, although I haven't posted any of my stories yet.I'm afaid i'll suck.

Well I loved this story very much. I really loved the image of Sarah standing there at the temple watching Jareth leaving. I always found that sort of image very romantic, I think it stems back to when I was little and watched Clash of the Titans. The wind whipping about the Lady's fine hair as she wached her Love ride off, and the silent prayers uttered under her breath.

Anyway, I can't wait to start reading the sequel!

Ok now to go and comment on all the others I read of yours and havn't had the time to.

~Rhia~

Ok since this story is already done I was going to wait till I finished to comment, but I just had to say something...I am so delightfully delighted {um blame it on the lateness for what I write, hehe} that you used works from Loreena McKennitt! I love her, and Marco Polo is one of my favorites, it really is the perfect song to dance to. The book of Secrets is one of her best, though I love her new album very very much...

Ok well now for on the story like my comment should be. I have read many of your other stories, I just have been too busy to be able to comment, as I normally stop reading at 4 or 5 in the morning. But I do plan to go back and coment on them.
I'm loving this story very much! And am delighted with how you display Jareth.
Well I am off to read more, and put this on my favorite story list.

~Rhia~

Just dropping a note to let you know I'm enjoying your story, particularly the Loreena McKennitt song(s) in this chapter (she's one of my favorite artists). Actually, I was also imagining 'Beltane Fire Dance' form Parallel Dreams.

Nice~!!

Well you know what they say, "curiosity killed the cat", and it certainly did with me.
It was amazing, i was hooked within the first two chapters. I love your style of writing, the way it was described i could picture everything. Kudos!

I just wanted to tell you that I love this story and it is my favourite Labyrinth fanfiction