It was kind of pretty in it's way. I found it rather morbid but all the same beautiful. Oh and you have wonderful grammar and spelling in the story but you forgot the H in with in your summary you might want to fix it or people may not read this beautifully written and amazing story like they should.

I love the story but as a segjustion people may not read it with out the correction. I'm just saying cause there are spelling/grammar freaks out there.