Good parody... but it hurt to read more than half way through... (_);

its so simplistic its ingenious i say good show sir. a very good show indeed.

Hang on. You seem to be turning this story into one big long rant against Lionheart? Why?

WoW! U R 1337 st0r1 haxor! thanks, this story is just too cracktastic for words. I heartily enjoyed it. Carry on...

not bad. at least I can keep this one straight I mean like half of the the missing hokage stories all have the same name try to read more then one and when thy update "which one was that agean?" you cant tell them apart so anything in this C2 that stands out is like "Yes one that not a clone of the other stories." and your making fun of the clones that's fantastic.

FOMCLMAO, this is gold.

Lol, interesting to say the least xD I wonder what else you'll add...

I found this to be a much better story than all the other PLH's "challenge" answers, which is sad, because this story sucks.

It's a parody, though, so that's OK.