"Kevin, I am your father!"

"No. No! THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!"

I'm so sorry, I couldn't resist. :P

So far it's interesting. I'm enjoying it a lot and you're doing a good job with keeping everyone in-character. The Gwevin moments are really sweet.

Just a quick grammar correction:

"Gwen nodded, patted her face." I believe it's more correct to say "Gwen nodded, patting her face." It makes the sentence sound more... like a grammatically correct sentence. However, I'm not entirely sure whether the way you say it is wrong or not because my Word doesn't pick up on it being wrong... Still, it doesn't pick up on everything.

Other than that small issue, everything's great and I'm really looking forwards to the next chapter!

wow... when's the next update cumin'?

Sky

Plz keep writing D

And cue the dramatic music( Dah dah dum) Cool I loved it pleas eup date soon.

L8er

three words: must. be. continued. PLEASE! INCREDIBLE! LOVED IT! WANNA READ MORE, LIKE, NOW! lol. so whenever, keep writing! awesome. brilliant job! nice style.

Oh! Poor Devin! Kevin it's being so... Oh, well, I really can't blame him, but still... Gah. Bad family relationships suck.

Anyway, I liked this first chapter very much, will you update soon? I'd really love to see what will happen bethween those two (Kevie and his father), and with Kevin and Gwen and all.

Well, I gotta go, but I'll add this to my faves list so I can now when you update. Take care and have a good day!

Chocolate kisses,

Josie May.

This is really good so far! I hope you keep writing it. P.S. 3 the Gwevin!

UPDATE! This is AWESOME! Before I found out that Kevin's dad's name was Devin, I also pictured it being Ethan! Please hurry up! Love it!

Intriguing plot line...you definitely got my attention. Please update again soon.

Please write more.

Very good story. I like it! Love the moments between Gwen and Kevin by the way. Nice touch.