That was seriously cute. I loved it. Please write more!

I loved the story, it was great. Keep up the great writing.

I do have just one little problem. It's not with the story but with the way you typed it. I found it NOT very User friendly with all those chinese squiggles in place of the punctuation marks like the Quotation marks and the appostrophes. You really should be careful to put the ponctuation marks in properly to make the story reader friendly.

I almost gave up at one point, I would have had I not been so caught up in the story. BUt it is very difficult to read.

But do keep up the writing just watch out for those ponctuations.

Lucius Lady

a little ooc on snapes part...but it was a refreshing change..very nice fic! indeed.

oh my god this is so good i'm putting this on my favorite list any way really origianl i hope your planing on writing a second chapter i really enjoyed this one, thank you for your time and i hope you consiter writing a second chapter!

Pretty good! :P Although...I don't think Snape would actually be that nice to any of his students...

hehe. u could do so much fun stuff with this story. could u update it please? even though u wrote it in january and itz october... lol

Vix

Cute ) WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER AAAAARRGGGGH!